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    oPPoSiteS
    (Told from Allen's POV)

    When I was young
    I learned this thing
    Called 'opposites' --
    Words that were
    Completely different
    From one another.
    There were ones
    Like
    Up and down,
    Big and small,
    Smile and frown,
    Short and tall,
    In and out,
    Dark and light,
    Good and evil,
    Black and white.

    And all this was
    Completely clear
    To me.

    But as I grew older,
    Things got more complicated.
    There were new opposites,
    Like
    Innocence and akuma
    Black Order and Clan of Noah
    Millenium Earl and exorcist.
    And in the beginning
    These new opposites
    Seemed just like the ones
    Of my childhood
    Just as cut and dry
    And clear and simple
    As in and out,
    Dark and light,
    Good and evil,
    Black and white.

    But soon I realized
    That in reality
    Things are never
    Clear and simple
    The way I'd always thought.
    Because sometimes shadows darken the day
    And sometimes black and white turn gray.
    And sometimes things aren't what they seem:
    Not 'opposite', but in between.

    So here I sit, left to ponder
    Where my place is
    In this confusing gray world.
    Will I be a member of the Black Order or
    Sit at the table of the Noah?
    Will I serve the Millenium Earl or fight him as an exorcist?
    Will I be in or out?
    Dark or light?
    Good or evil?
    Black or white?

    Or somewhere in between?
    "Sometimes life is like a dark tunnel---you can't always see where you're going, but if you keep walking, you will come to a better place." ~Iroh, Avatar, The Last Airbender
    "And now for something completely different..."(plays clip of Hitler juggling fish on a unicycle)

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    Nice! You did a good job of expressing Allen's confusion, and this poem pretty much sums up one of the main themes of DGM - shades of grey. Keep up the good work!

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    thank you!
    I plan to write a lot more stuff for this forum : this poor, horribly deprived forum!
    I mean, weve got a good start here ( Cubias poem was really good too!) but we need MORE!!!!!!!
    "Sometimes life is like a dark tunnel---you can't always see where you're going, but if you keep walking, you will come to a better place." ~Iroh, Avatar, The Last Airbender
    "And now for something completely different..."(plays clip of Hitler juggling fish on a unicycle)

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    I know! It's a real shame there are so few fanfics, I'd write some if I had any ideas. I'll try to come up with something.

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    hmmm...whos your fav character?
    "Sometimes life is like a dark tunnel---you can't always see where you're going, but if you keep walking, you will come to a better place." ~Iroh, Avatar, The Last Airbender
    "And now for something completely different..."(plays clip of Hitler juggling fish on a unicycle)

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    Hard to choose, there are loads of characters I like, but I'd say Lavi. I should try writing something from his POV.

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    A Lavi fan?! Oh,thats perfect!!!

    I've wanted to co write a Lavi fanfic for a while.
    Do you want to write one with me?
    *pretty please?*
    "Sometimes life is like a dark tunnel---you can't always see where you're going, but if you keep walking, you will come to a better place." ~Iroh, Avatar, The Last Airbender
    "And now for something completely different..."(plays clip of Hitler juggling fish on a unicycle)

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    Yeah! I'd love to co-write one.

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    so now...ideas?

    I was thinking doing Lavi and a Finder girl and then somehow making it forbidden (because apparently forbidden love is how everyone gets their thrills these days...*cough* Twilight *cough, cough*)

    And of course, if you dont want to do something serious, we could do something random, like Lavi snooping through peoples rooms and being a panty thief or something odd like that XD
    "Sometimes life is like a dark tunnel---you can't always see where you're going, but if you keep walking, you will come to a better place." ~Iroh, Avatar, The Last Airbender
    "And now for something completely different..."(plays clip of Hitler juggling fish on a unicycle)

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    Sounds good to me. I'm not a Twilight fan any more (Breaking Dawn ruined it for me) but forbidden love can be a great theme if it's done right.

    You know how Lavi's not supposed to get close to anyone, being the next Bookman? I don't think I've seen that taken into account in a Lavi x OC fanfic. So the Finder girl could have feelings for him but go out of her way not to let them show, as she doesn't want to get in the way of his ambition. Then he somehow finds out. So they have to keep their relationship a secret. Maybe there could be something else that makes their love forbidden, I don't know. I'm going to have to put some thought into this.

 

 

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