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About LinkBackskukukukuku! I have the 1st post in the fanfic section, yays! \^_^/
This is a sad little poem in Lenalee's POV, where she is sharing a last moment with Allen after a fatal battle.
Hrm you may find the original post of it on my DA page! :3
Plz enjoy!
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What did you save me for?
"Because we're friends."
But....
"Shh....you're hurt badly."
Those were the last words from him.
Then,
He died.
Blood all over him,
It started to snow.
This cold, white snow,
Washed off his blood.
But,
He wasn't alive.
He's still dead.
"The dead cannot be resurrected."
He told me that.
He died beacuse of me.
Why wasn't I stronger?
I looked at my hands.
They're so...small.
Why weren't they bigger?
Why wasn't I stronger?
I couldn't save him.
Even I was covered in blood,
I couldn't save him.
I was the one saved.
I...hated myself for not saving him.
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Thread: Snow: A DGM Fan Poem
- 12-03-2008, 06:35 PM #1Junior Member
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Snow: A DGM Fan Poem Cookies? >:3
- 12-04-2008, 05:10 AM #2Senior Member
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*passes cookie* Here.
I like the way you portray Lenalee's feelings.. (:
- 12-08-2008, 02:01 PM #3Member
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Awwww I've always liked this poem of Lenalee :3
You gotta make more fanpoems/fics tho! Your stuff is always amazing.Xbox Live:
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- 12-08-2008, 03:57 PM #4Senior Member
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I love it. Esp. the AllenxLenalee. I would love to read all of your poems. I'd write some and share, but I quit writing after things happened....I'd so take your advice in poem making if I still wrote. I can only do first person. Not anything else. Ahh, I can imagine the scene. It hurts a lot for her. You made her pain come to life, like the song Haru Haru.
- 12-14-2008, 06:16 AM #5Administrator
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Great Poem! At least someone is taking advantage of this section of the forum.
- 03-15-2009, 04:03 PM #6Member
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Nice Poem , keep up the good work!
- 03-17-2009, 08:20 AM #7Senior Member
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1 2 3 AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
XDXD yay AllenxLinalee: cutest DGM couple ever!!!!"Sometimes life is like a dark tunnel---you can't always see where you're going, but if you keep walking, you will come to a better place." ~Iroh, Avatar, The Last Airbender
"And now for something completely different..."(plays clip of Hitler juggling fish on a unicycle)
- 03-18-2009, 08:11 AM #8Senior Member
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This is pathetic...This IS the 'Ultimate Fan Website, right? AND THERES ONLY ONE FANFIC!!!!!!??????!!!!!
...not that it isn't a GOOD fanfic...because it is, dont get me wrong...
BUT STILL! Seriously, people!"Sometimes life is like a dark tunnel---you can't always see where you're going, but if you keep walking, you will come to a better place." ~Iroh, Avatar, The Last Airbender
"And now for something completely different..."(plays clip of Hitler juggling fish on a unicycle)
- 09-22-2010, 06:21 AM #9Senior Member
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ooohh!!! i really like it!!! haha it's so awesome ...the way linali grieved for allen...and the snow...ooohh i can picture it in my head!!! haha
=["]=Watashi wa hokō aren daisuki!
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