Ooo, im going to go see that thread then Llaimrid!
It wasn't too surgary btw. Tyki balanced it out... Although you might have wanted slightly more trauma for Lenalee so that it looks like there WONT be a happy ending and then poof! Happy ending! (although, then you really run it close to a 'sugary' ending, but if done well?)
It's still great and you dont need to change it, it's just what I would do.
(I tend to write stories that everything goes wrong and towards the end, when everything looks up, I kill off the characters >But dont worry, I havent written Allen's death etc, only killing the characters I create!)
Californa? Nice! I'm only a few miles from Hatfield! Might have seen you XDD
awww llaimrid! *hugs*



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But dont worry, I havent written Allen's death etc, only killing the characters I create!)




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